A certain segment of individuals
argues
that money can not buy happiness. In my opinion, it is possible for people to be happy even without having money and only aspects of life can Correct subject-verb agreement
argue
create
a vital role in creating happiness.
Verb problem
play
To begin
with, it is always not the property that makes people happy. Linking Words
Although
having capital makes people happy, it is not Linking Words
necessarily
to follow those folks without always suffering. Change the word
necessary
For example
, in the world's happiest country Linking Words
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Buthan ranks at number six, and it is not the wealthiest country in the world. So what makes Buthan the happiest person on the planet? It is none other than the simplicity of their lives. Simplicity can make a huge difference in the human mind, it can induce pleasure feelings in a person.
folks can create their own exhilaration by changing aspects of the ways that they look into their lives. Add a comma
list,
For instance
, a doctor who works in a hospital works hard to earn wealth, sometimes he does a lot of private practice apart from the work he does in his hospital. Linking Words
That is
because he thinks he can create enjoyment for himself by earning a lot of wealth, getting luxury cars, and living in a huge palace. But it can change his view to pursuing jubilation by seeing the smiles of his patients, he can become happy Linking Words
while
doing Linking Words
lesser
work. Correct word choice
less
Moreover
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this
will help to improve his personal health as well, which will become an additional advantage for him.
In conclusion, bills are not always the key to enjoyment, sometimes simplicity and the ways of looking into our own lives can make an individual happy. So, it is better we do not chase huge desires which make us Linking Words
overwhelm
.Wrong verb form
overwhelmed
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