Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Indeed, the tourist industry has become the largest contributor to several economies across the globe. Some people believe that touring other lands

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countries because most of the time tourists do not care about local traditions and cultures. In my opinion, I do not agree with

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idea because of the positive aspects of

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activity including better communication among societies and many others. Several obvious benefits related to the phenomenon of visiting other states and

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foreign traditions around the world are clear. One of them is that humans are social animals and often they need to communicate with each other.

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interaction could significantly raise harmony among different societies.

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, when they try to learn the domestic language to interact they start to feel the emotions and thoughts of others.

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a wide range range of benefits in terms of building social relations.

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, it is argued that interaction among foreign individuals may build tensions because some people feel offended when foreigners do not respect their cultural values. Avoiding the hijab in Islamic countries with conventional thinking is the best illustration of these views, which hurt the feelings of the religious part of the community. Despite

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concern being relatively valid, it seems that

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can be controlled by implementing simple rules and regulations by the authorities.

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, Qatar has recently prohibited signs of homosexuals during the event of

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and everything has been resolved.

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, if some problems arise because of global travel, simple measures can alleviate them. In conclusion, international

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has become financially critical for many regions across the world these days.

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some hold the view that

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trend may lead to raising social issues, I am convinced that simple steps can mitigate these downsides and may bring financial stability to many areas