Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
Some individuals argue that posing higher
taxes
on different manufacturers will help with pollution reduction. However
, others opine that there are greater approaches that can be utilized and I agree with this
opinion. Subsidies and rewards can be provided to motivate businesses to go green.
Imposing higher taxes
on industries
that produce higher carbon
footprint
can be a good strategy to push these Fix the agreement mistake
footprints
industries
to find ways to minimize their carbon
emissions. Their duties should be dependent on their carbon
footprints to force them look
for alternatives or other approaches for them to manufacture the same product with lesser Add the particle
to look
carbon
dioxide or other harmful gases. For example
, they can use renewable energy, fuel switching, and efficient use of recycling materials. In this
manner, instead
of paying dues, they can use the money to become a green industry.
On the other hand
, some people believe that this
will not solve the problem and another approach is necessary to minimize pollution. One better alternative is for the government to give subsidies or incentives to green industries
. This
will promote and will motivate other manufacturers to go green. For instance
, Tesla received funding from the administration for going less
Change the quantifier
fewer
carbon
emissions. With this
approach, more and more companies will establish themselves and would become green industries
that lessen pollution. In this
way, instead
of punishing industry
with higher Fix the agreement mistake
industries
taxes
, the government can provide help or rewards for them to build and produce better.
In conclusion, I agree that there are better and more sustainable approaches like subsidies or funding rather than higher taxes
. The government should push more positive strategies rather than negative ones.Submitted by leola_8ef on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
