Most Countries allow 18 year olds to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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of 18 because, they believe that driving is not an easy thing to do since it needs a lot of focus and a wise mind, which teenagers don't have, Use synonyms
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to have a high sense of responsibility and to be stronger. there is a recent study that says if you put a lot of work into your boy, he will become stronger and better.
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