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some experts believe that it is better for child to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages.

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Children
 are like blank pages where anything could be written. Learning in
schools
 is one of the factors that build their personalities.
In particular
, learning foreign
languages
 is crucial for
children
's development and when it is at a smaller age the more it will be easier, faster and more unforgettable. It is true that it may be difficult for a small child to learn a foreign
language
, in the beginning, but the benefits will be far more than the difficulties. The benefits of learning a new
language
 at primary
schools
 are various. One of these is that six years old
children
 have an enormous capacity for learning, as they have pure brains. Studies show that
children
 in primary
schools
 can learn at least three
languages
 at the same time.
Students
 in some Lebanese
schools
 are learning Arabic, English and French at the same level and they are showing the same advancement in all of these.
In addition
, the student at
this
 age can master what he is learning and will never forget it
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case he is practising and using it. In the beginning, it will seem difficult for a little child to learn an additional
language
 but with a little effort, he will succeed. On the other side, in secondary school, the
students
 have to take many courses and focus on their future careers more than on studying foreign
languages
.
Moreover
, at
this
 age,
students
 had already chosen the
languages
 they wanted to learn and in case they choose to learn another
language
 it will be forever a
second
language
 that will be rarely used so they will not be professional in using it.
For example
, the french educated
students
 in Lebanon are studying English as a
second
language
 starting in year 5, so they can not master the accent or be fluent in English as in French. In conclusion, it may be difficult to start learning a foreign
language
 at primary school but the benefits will overweigh these difficulties.
Students
 must be encouraged to learn which is beneficial for their future.
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