There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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In recent years, destructive emotions

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lack of morals and patience would have many tangible consequences. The main reason for the prevalence of these attitudes could be the country's susceptibility to bad news. The world has experienced several crises in recent years, and with the development of social media and the promotion of digital gadgets, all generations, from children to the elderly, have access to

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information.

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, people faced a new wave of dilemmas when the coronavirus spread and the pandemic occurred.

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negative news transforms into an element that impacts on mind. Another reason is tackling a hectic and fast-paced lifestyle

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financial difficulties

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poverty and unemployment.

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group of concerns which is conventional among the population has a direct relation to the nerves. These aggression issues, in my opinion, would be caused by insurmountable effects. The behaviours of society will be devastating, reflecting and impacting not only selfhood but

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the community.

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, when employers, as an effective part, create an anxious atmosphere in the office, productivity drops the next day.

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, if the state's main aggressive parents are aggressive, the aggressive children will be raised as a hope for the government's future.

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, because the young generation is the most impressionable part of a country, parents should not be transferred

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that they deal with. in conclusion, if pessimistic news

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standard and sometimes banned for youngsters, crucial problems would be addressed for residents of each state and the world might not

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undergone massive danger.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Outrage culture
Amplification
Economic hardship
Sensationalist
Polarization
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Social frustration
Divisiveness
Societal norms
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