There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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lack of morals and patience would have many tangible consequences. The main reason for the prevalence of these attitudes could be the country's susceptibility to bad news. The world has experienced several crises in recent years, and with the development of social media and the promotion of digital gadgets, all generations, from children to the elderly, have access to

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information.

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, people faced a new wave of dilemmas when the coronavirus spread and the pandemic occurred.

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negative news transforms into an element that impacts on mind. Another reason is tackling a hectic and fast-paced lifestyle

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financial difficulties

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poverty and unemployment.

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group of concerns which is conventional among the population has a direct relation to the nerves. These aggression issues, in my opinion, would be caused by insurmountable effects. The behaviours of society will be devastating, reflecting and impacting not only selfhood but

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the community.

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, when employers, as an effective part, create an anxious atmosphere in the office, productivity drops the next day.

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, if the state's main aggressive parents are aggressive, the aggressive children will be raised as a hope for the government's future.

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, because the young generation is the most impressionable part of a country, parents should not be transferred

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that they deal with. in conclusion, if pessimistic news

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standard and sometimes banned for youngsters, crucial problems would be addressed for residents of each state and the world might not

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undergone massive danger.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Outrage culture
Amplification
Economic hardship
Sensationalist
Polarization
Constructive outcomes
Social frustration
Divisiveness
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There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of town and cities than to build more housing . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Overall, men are more satisfied with local conditions than women.