Topic 3: Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should been encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Education
plays a vital role in everybody's life. Some communities
believe that students should continue their education
by doing higher studies
while some other communities
argue with this
matter and say that they should serve their society by doing jobs
like mechanics, builders, etc. In this
essay, I will discuss both scenarios and then
I will give my opinion on this
matter with some relevant examples.
On the one side, In this
modern era, there is huge competition in the education
system. Most people
are choosing higher studies
to improve their skills in their subjects. By doing higher studies
, people
are getting more opportunities in various workforces. Nowadays, many people
are travelling abroad for their higher education
because students are provided with better facilities and the best life. For instance
, From India, many people
travel abroad for higher studies
and now they have better opportunities in India in multiple workforces. By doing higher education
, people
will improve their skills in their subject and get some empirical knowledge by doing practical things.
On the other side, Some communities
believe that it is better to do jobs
and serve their nation. Most people
in some countries have financial problems and are unable to continue their higher education
so they prefer to do jobs
. For instance
, In India, many communities
are middle-class and have financial problems so their children will start to do jobs
after completing their under-graduation. In this
way, people
can help their families with their financial status and then
look after their family members.
To sum up, In my view, I agree with the former statement that it is better to do higher studies
and get some empirical knowledge about their subjects to lead a standard life.Submitted by madarapulavanya1998 on
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