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Some people believe that handwriting is no longer useful in the modern world and should not be taught in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #world #schools
Writing a letter and sending
envelope
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 used to be the only
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option to communicate with people all around the world. Now,
thankfully
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 to technology and
internet
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the internet
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, we can keep in touch with friends in a faster way.
As a result
, many individuals are prone to think that handwriting become meaningless. I stand again
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 statement and
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only
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 individual character but
also
 helps
memorize
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us memorize
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 what we write. It is not a secret that everyone has his own exclusive and genuine signature. People
are usually have
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 far too many tries to achieve the ideal signature that can represent themself.
In addition
 to that, when it comes to matters of learning, no one will dispute
about
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memoization advantages. The main reason why handwriting
superior
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is superior
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computer
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 typings is because our body has physical memory which
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extremely
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extremly
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extremely
 helpful when we have to recall what we have written. Another overlooked reason why handwriting should be still
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 is for romantic purposes. A vast majority of females are looking forward to receiving love letters as they emphasize lovers' relationships. Whereas,
a
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quick chatting might be considered
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a
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dry messaging. When someone put
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 to write a message,
for instance
, it shows attitude
to
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 the companion. I would not born
is
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if
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 my father had not sent
this
 kind of message to my mom. In conclusion, descript the fact that handwriting is under endangered, it should not be removed from
from
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education system. It helps not only for memorizing but
also
 can
shows
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personality
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the personality
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 of
writer
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.
Moreover
, it
also
 supports building romantic relationships
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive development
  • fine motor skills
  • cultural heritage
  • technological advances
  • digital fatigue
  • over-dependence on technology
  • memory retention
  • personal expression
  • manual dexterity
  • traditional skills
  • digital devices
  • unique form of communication
  • educational strategy
  • pedagogical approach
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