Some children spend hours everyday on smartphones. Why is this the case. Do you think this has a negative or positive development?

Some

kids

devote hours of their

everyday

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on smartphones.

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essay will look at the reasons and the pros and cons.

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this

essay will support the idea and give relevant examples as to why

this

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good

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development for the

child

to spend more

times

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time

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on their

phones

.

First

of all, most children after school spend hours on their phone for either to

learn

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or for games.

for instance

some parents

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sign

signes

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their

kids

on certain apps which

contains

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educative programs on

phone

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their phone

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such

as learning

aphabets

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alphabets

, colours, and even Rhymes to engage them whiles they go about their chores at home.A typical example is cocomelon where

kids

learn to play at the same

time

.

Toldlers

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Toddlers

learn their

first

song and get to know their

alphabets

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before enrolling into

pre

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preschools

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schools

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. Despite

phones

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children to learn , it does have some cons.It can be damaging when

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activity is not substituted with other activities.

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, when a

child

is only introduced to just

phones

and family

time

is neglected, the

child

may grow up in solitude, and less supervised. The

child

may even find ways to watch programs which is age limited or even gambling.more so having a phone to keep them company means they'll

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lose

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loose

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interest in having to get to know people and make friends

to

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engage in meaningful conversations.when

such

is not corrected, it can lead to depression and other bad

behaviors

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.

However

,

kids

learn to be informed and enlightened as he spends much

time

on their smartphones.At a younger

age

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they learn more

quicker

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.

Therefore

allowing them to be on their

phones

makes them smart.They can learn to make calls

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in times

times

intimes

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in times

of

crises

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,

learn

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and learn

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new activities like DIYs , which can boost their

self confidence

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self-confidence

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of

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apply

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also

trying

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to be innovative. They connect with families and friends near and far . In conclusion, children being on

phones

all the

time

can end them in distasteful

behavior

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behaviour

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and

also

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them about the world and new

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possibilities

posibilities

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possibilities

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