There is no doubt that these days weddings
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are becoming highly disputatious
betweenChange preposition
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all families. Some people consider that wasting much
money
on wedding
events
is reasonable, while
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argue against that contention. I
believe that it is meaningful to spend
money
on
such
events
. In the succeeding paragraph,
iChange the capitalization
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intend to delve into
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for both beliefs as well as proffer justification for my viewpoint.
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terms of the positive side, there is a belief that
a
lot
of
money
on wedding
parties
and different
events
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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essential. The main reason given to support
this
is
such
events
considered as from the countries
. To illustrate, in some nations
such
as, Saudi Arabia, the
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parties
should
be holdChange the verb form
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in a big
and more than 100
invitedAdd a missing verb
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inChange preposition
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such
events
with
range of food.
Thus
, it opens chances for many
to
big
events
.
Nevertheless
, others
believe that weast
money
on
thisCorrect determiner usage
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parties
is unreasonable.
This
is because
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a
lotAdd the preposition
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people
sufferingWrong verb form
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from
lakeAdd an article
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of food and water.
For example
,
poorChange preposition
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countries when watching
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spendingReplace the word
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a
lot
of
money
inChange preposition
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such
events
they will
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fealCorrect your spelling
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and
theChange the word
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life is unfair.
HensCorrect your spelling
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, the
in
thisCorrect determiner usage
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countries
be Unnecessary verb
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increase more than before.
to sum up,
thatCorrect word choice
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spending a
lot
of
money
on wedding
parties
and other celebrations is just a waste, spending
money
on
such
events
is acceptable. I believe that it is
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to spend
money
forChange preposition
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that
events
.