Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties and other celebrations is just a waste. Others, however, think that such events are necessary, so spending money on them is acceptable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
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others
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organise
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these
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on
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that
spending a Correct word choice
although
lot
of money
on wedding parties
and other celebrations is just a waste, spending money
on such
events
is acceptable. I believe that it is normally
to spend Replace the word
normal
money
for
that Change preposition
on
events
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