Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent you agree?
Groups of
people
around the world
think social media
apps and websites such
as Instagram and Facebook had an abysmal result on communities and humans individually. Although
, there are many positive and negative impacts of social media
as you will see I talked about them in this
essay.
On the one hand, when you spend too much of your time
on these types of apps only because you are bored, your time
has been used uselessly. Thus
, while you spend your time
there, lots of people
worldwide are communicating in person and increasing their social skills which you do not. For example
, TikTok is a social networking app for people
around the world
to share their videos there which is not helpful for us to use because while we spend our time
in an unhelpful way also
our communication skills will not improve. Hence
, applications like this
are always lurking to hunt our time
and attention.
On the other hand
, applications such
as Facebook helped us share our ideas with people
around the world
. However
, users can be aware of other humans’ news and their experience. For instance
, in applications such
as Pinterest, artists around the world
can share their artworks and they can find new ideas there which is very helpful. Therefore
, social media
and networks are positive tools if you use them correctly.
In conclusion, each person and group of people
should be aware of the negative impact can social media
apps do on their life and learn how to use them in a luminary way.Submitted by jaberi.mahyar on
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