Nowadays people are moving to urban areas from rural areas what are the reason and what problem can cause

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In the present situation, the increasing number of
people
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who live in the
city
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have
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never been
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than now. The urban areas have appealed
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individuals
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several reasons and as living in those
places
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became a trend,
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, a myriad of problems have
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as
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will be mentioned below. At the outset, there
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pool
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of reasons why living in the
city
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has
became
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a
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popular
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popular
trend among
people
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.
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, it is
undeliable
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undeniable
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the fact that famous facilities and cutting-edge
entermainments
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entertainment
entertainments
are built and located in the
city
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centre. To be more specific, it is safe to conclude that in the rural area, there are few
places
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to enjoy
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entertainments, which can be easily seen in the
city
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such
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such
as theatres. Another point worth mentioning is that not only
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education system but
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the
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compelling job market can be found in
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urban
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, companies which are hard not to know as Google and Samsung are all located in the capital
city
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of those countries, by which I mean, most of the famous firms are in the
city
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centre and so as to get
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into
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those large
company
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companies
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, individuals are likely to move from their small town to the large cities.
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,
this
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phenomenon mentioned above has
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tonnes of adverse impacts
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not only
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country itself but
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to
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the citizens. Given that the number of
people
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increased
in particular
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cities, it means that the
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people
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in rural areas have decreased, which will cause serious problems in the lack of
employments
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employment
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.
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will
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affect
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effect
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the development of those areas in the long term, and the
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country
coountry
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country
will witness a severe
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gab
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between
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city
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and the rural
places
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. When it comes to the citizens by the
skyroaket
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skyrocket
of cars, they will face a serious traffic
congunction
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, and
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live in a place where it is full of carbon and sulfur dioxide, which means a place with poor air quality. In conclusion, because of
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of attractive perks when living in the
city
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, numerous publics are now likely to reside in the
city
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, which caused
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unexpected negative impacts
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to
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the country. I strongly believe that the
governments
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has
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to cope with these causing problems in advance before it gets more severe to handle.
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