Fewer young people do farming work in rural areas. Why? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work?

At present, the question of why less
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remains a conundrum. I will give my own points about the causes of
this
trend and whether it is good for youngsters to work
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farming.
Firstly
,
less
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people
do
farming
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job
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in rural areas because those involved are usually underpaid.
As a result
, it becomes a real hurdle to lead their family a happy life while living
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a low standard. Everyone desires to have tasty meals, to live in gorgeous houses, to send their kid to
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school
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so they would never accept
such
a low wage .
Secondly
, extreme working conditions
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another burden that
people
have to take on.
For example
, when it is in the middle of June,
farmers
are still
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the fields
as
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a daily basis
although
the weather is rainy which is detrimental to endure.
In contrast
, even an office worker can get
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higher
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working
complex
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.
In other words
,
this
profession is the
last
choice and
people
avoid it because making
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a living seems to be impossible. Those
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pieces of
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show that there are a lot more well-paid careers for
people
to choose if they leave the remote area to study in
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.
Such
as
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, architecture
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and other rewarding roles, so I strongly disagree to let
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youngsters work
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the profession of cultivating.
Moreover
, if students become
farmers
, they will waste all the time and money that they spent on academic education because watering and collecting does not need
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high level
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qualification
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but health, all of their accomplishments at school are unusable
then
.
For instance
, unlike
farmers
,
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IT developers can earn much more in a month.
In addition
, those
people
also
have the
the
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rights
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to experience other perks
such
as being flexible in working schedules, which
farmers
could never have . In conclusion, there are a few key reasons for the decreasingly attendance to the work that
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agriculture products being little amount of pay and
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working environment. Due to
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, the young should consider
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another choice which is more try-worthy with more creature comforts.
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