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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

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Some
people
 argue that nobody will be interested in buying printed reading stuff since online reading without paying will be available for everyone in the future.
First
 of all,not all the
people
 in the world are willing to read electronic
books
 or digitized magazines every day.
For instance
, I am one of those
people
,who gets severe headaches and feels depressed when I stay for long hours in front of the computer screen. Reading
books
 online can hurt your eyes and make them feel itchy.
Moreover
, the sense of touch in printed
books
 is something unique and joyful for many
people
.
However
,electronic
books
 and magazines have some benefits too. Your access to printed
books
 is a major drawback,but with online
books
,you can have unlimited access to any book or magazine,which is in your interest.
Furthermore
,you always have to pay for a printed book or even a newspaper to get the news, while it may become totally free in the future and you can become aware of anything Just by a quick search on the internet. In conclusion,in my opinion,
although
 printed
books
 have some drawbacks, their benefits outweigh their disadvantages because many
people
 are not used to reading everything online and they enjoy reading the papers in a book.With the growth of depression and anxiety, especially in children
as a result
 of playing video games, computers, etc, I think nowadays we should encourage
people
 to use printed
books
 more than ever to overcome some mentioned issues in the future.
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