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Very few school children learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as a part of the school curriculum. Do you agree or disagree?

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Schools usually deal with different academic subjects while
overlook
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 teaching
money
management
skills
.
This
 is why many
students
, who do well in school, struggle while taking care of their finances in real
life
. Academic studies and financial intelligence cannot be seen as inherent contradictions but as two mutually independent competencies. So, I believe that the value of
money
 and
money
management
 should be taught in schools. The author of the book “Rich Dad Poor Dad” terms Financial Independence as you being able to make your
money
 work for you and not the other way around.
Students
 who get to learn about how to spend, invest and save
money
 rarely find themselves in financial predicaments despite what their salaries bring in.
Such
skills
 are often inculcated through family and teachers. And
students
, who lack these
skills
, usually find themselves with insufficient funds no matter how much their jobs pay them. They never learn to develop their assets. It renders them
dependents
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 on their jobs for
life
 as it is their only source of income. The earnings are mostly spent on their liabilities leaving them with paltry savings. If
money
management
 is taught as a part of the school curriculum, all the
students
 will get a chance to learn
such
skills
. They will grow up to have more knowledge of
money
 and finance. Consecutively, they will have a better perspective while making financial decisions.
This
 will lead to a more stable, enriched and self-reliant society. Lessons learned in schools
last
 for a long and
that is
 why teaching
money
management
 to
students
 is so vital. To conclude, earning
money
 may not be the goal in
life
 but it is the
money
 that provides us with our basic needs and a sense of security. Learning the
skills
 to value and handle
money
 is a crucial part of
life
.
Thus
, I believe that lessons for financial
management
 should be made a part of the school curriculum so that more and more
students
 can have a financially stable future.
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