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Some people think that the government is wasting on arts that this money could be spent elsewhere to what extent do u agree or disagree with this

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Art is a significant, vibrant and huge part of everyone's life and enriches the soul through its various forms. Different people have different views about the
government
, which spends money to maintain
such
 beautiful work. Some people think that the
government
 is wasting money on it whereas some folks have just an opposite point of view. In my opinion, I think the Govt. is doing great work by lending funds to the arts. I think
this
 way for two reasons, which I will explore in
this
 essay.
Firstly
,
to begin
 with, I would like to say that, pragmatically it is totally right to spend money on arts as it is composed of so many things. A sculpture, painting, sketching, singing, dancing or cooking delicious food, one and all needs special attention and care. We as human beings are bound to all these things to improve our lives,
therefore
, the authority is paying attention eventually towards our better life.
For example
, by visiting the museum we come to know the culture and heritage of our country and world. Not only
us
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for us
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, but for our children
also
 museums are the learning place.
Subsequently
, with the help of good training one can flourish their career in their desired field. Some students do not have so
much
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many
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 funds for arts learning along with their studies.
However
, with the support of state institutes, many students are learning various forms of art and utilising the learned skills by making them into a profession.
For example
, one of my friends has run a
dance
 studio and taught young children various forms of
dance
. She has learned
dance
 along with her studies during college by joining a
dance
 academy, which is accredited by the
government
. In conclusion, I believe that the
government
 is doing the absolutely right thing by giving support to enhance art, which enhances the life of people in contrasting ways.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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