Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

Our

cities

day by day are going to be

more busy

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which most urban centres can not handle

this

amount of population which is the biggest concern for them.

This

essay will discuss some causes of overpopulation and solutions

with

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to

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that. Most

peoples

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people

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around the world always wanted to have a

job

with high salaries and they can try their chances and apply for these

job

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jobs

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in

main

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the main

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and important

cities

.

Also

,

besides

of

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high salaries, in urban

centres

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people

can spend their time in more interesting places which are only available in that city.

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, all of the huge companies have branches in Toronto

such

as Google and

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those who

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wants to work for them should live near Google offices,

as a result

,

people

have to change their living area to

the

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apply

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busy

cities

like Toronto to find a good

job

and spend their time in interesting

funlands

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fun lands

fenlands

such

a Wonderland.

However

,

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the government

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government

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governments

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of each country should find a solution

for

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this

problem because most of the major

cities

can not handle

this

amount of

people

.

Job

problem

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problems

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in small

cities

can

be solve

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very easily because in

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today's

todays

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world

people

can work

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from

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form

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from

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their

home

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homes

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and they do not have to reach the office

everyday

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which

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wich

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companies can hire everyone from anywhere.

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,

government

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the government

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should help small and local businesses to do investment in small

cities

to create shopping centres and any fun places,

as a result

,

people

can use their local interesting places.

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,

Mcdonald

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Mcdonald's

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have

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a lot of branches everywhere and you do not have to ride to the major

cities

to eat a burger. To conclude,

huge

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a huge

the huge

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amount of

people

went to the major and capital

cities

to live because of more

job

opportunities and spending time which government can easily deal with

these two problem

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this two problem

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with

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only make more attention

in

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the countrysides

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countrysides

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countryside

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and small

cities

.