Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
Our
cities
day by day are going to be more busy
which most urban centres can not handle Replace the words
busier
this
amount of population which is the biggest concern for them. This
essay will discuss some causes of overpopulation and solutions with
that.
Most Change preposition
to
peoples
around the world always wanted to have a Fix the agreement mistake
people
job
with high salaries and they can try their chances and apply for these job
in Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
main
and important Correct article usage
the main
cities
. Also
, besides
of
high salaries, in urban Change preposition
apply
centres
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,centres
people
can spend their time in more interesting places which are only available in that city. For example
, all of the huge companies have branches in Toronto such
as Google and who
wants to work for them should live near Google offices, Correct pronoun usage
those who
as a result
, people
have to change their living area to the
busy Correct article usage
apply
cities
like Toronto to find a good job
and spend their time in interesting funlands
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fun lands
fenlands
such
a Wonderland.
However
, Add an article
the government
government
of each country should find a solution Fix the agreement mistake
governments
for
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to
this
problem because most of the major cities
can not handle this
amount of people
. Job
problem
in small Fix the agreement mistake
problems
cities
can be solve
very easily because in Change the verb form
be solved
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today's
todays
world Change to a genitive case
today's
people
can work Correct your spelling
from
form
their Correct your spelling
from
home
and they do not have to reach the office Fix the agreement mistake
homes
everyday
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every day
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which
wich
companies can hire everyone from anywhere. Correct your spelling
which
In addition
, government
should help small and local businesses to do investment in small Add an article
the government
cities
to create shopping centres and any fun places, as a result
, people
can use their local interesting places. For instance
, Mcdonald
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Mcdonald's
have
a lot of branches everywhere and you do not have to ride to the major Change the verb form
has
cities
to eat a burger.
To conclude, huge
amount of Add an article
a huge
the huge
people
went to the major and capital cities
to live because of more job
opportunities and spending time which government can easily deal with these two problem
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this two problem
these two problems
with
only make more attention Change preposition
by
in
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to
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the countrysides
countrysides
and small Fix the agreement mistake
countryside
cities
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...