“Prevention is better than cure.” Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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spending a big part of

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fund

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for

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purpose can be challenging for both

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care

professionals and

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. I disagree with the opinion of spending a big part of

money

reserved for medical emergencies, on

health

education

.

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healthy

helathy

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healthy

society ,but In my opinion

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should allocate a different fund for

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,

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of using

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from

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medical

funds

.

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public awareness can

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possible

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a very small budget,

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social media can be used for

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purpose ,

also

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care

professionals can do it face to face during

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visits.

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with the help of social

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this

task can be achieved. All of these can be done

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without

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alot

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a lot

lot

of medical from treatment

funds

. Considering

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like

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pandemic

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govrnment

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should be

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mindful

about

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the

money

allocated for medical usage.

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really important to have enough resources in case of an emergency. And

this

can only be possible if the

money

is spent

for

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treatment

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instead

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instead

of,

health

education

. There is no doubt that

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the utmost priority should be

health

care

.And

this

can only be achieved if, there are enough

funds

for

this

purpose. Spending a bigger chunk of

money

on

health

education

, from medical

funds

can hamper the utmost goal. In the

end

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would like to say that both,

health

education

and

health

care

are important for a healthy and happy society,

however

medical treatment is a necessity and should

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priority over

health

awareness.