Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the numbers of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Health is Wealth and everyone should take care of

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if we have more

sports

facilities

then

public health will improve or other measures required to make it effective. In my ,opinion how the increasing the number of

sports

facilities

help alone if extra measures are not taken?

Firstly

It will be definitely good to have more

facilities

for

sports

as if if we don'

t

have the option to play

then

we can'

t

join or play. for ,example

this

summer

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was not able to enrol my daughter on soccer as all the

facilities

are full. but despite having so many

facilities

if some are not joining

then

it will be a waste of public taxation money.

On the other hand

, I believe that public awareness is

also

required about these

facilities

. if they don'

t

know they won'

t

go. Awareness could be about how to play those

sports

, their rules and regulations. when centres are open their detailed timings . To

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, increasing

sports

facilities

is important but it is more important to raise public awareness of these

facilities

so that the general public can enjoy these activities .