Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people the freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With the ever-advancing development in

aviation

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industry, higher availability of air

travels

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has lowered the price of air

tickets

. A heated

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about the price has been sparked

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, as some convey that cheap air

tickets

provide the majority

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opportunity to explore the world, while others question the surge in

this

means of commute would give rise to environmental issues and support a rise in price. Given the pros and cons, I agree to have more affordable fares

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and will examine the benefits of travelling to personal development and the

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effect it brings to the environment. In terms of the positive consequences of having cheap flight

tickets

, it

support

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well-rounded personal growth and

self discovery

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via long-

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travel. Having

exposed

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to the different

side

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of the world, travellers are immersed in

different

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a different

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style

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of living. Throughout their journey, not only can they improve a wide range of personal traits,

such

as interpersonal and

problem solving

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skills, but

also

experience and reap the positive aspects of others'

culture

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.

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, western foreigners are often amazed by the idea of Confucianism which greatly

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emphasise

emphazise

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emphasises

on respect and self-reflection.

Therefore

, being able to travel with more affordable

tickets

widen one's horizon and

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his or her connotation. Despite the advantage, there

are

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some devastating

downside

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brought by the rise of aeroplane use. Transportation of all modes has been said to be one of the culprits of global warming. In fact,

trasnporting

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transporting

by flights

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to a significant amount of exhaust gases produced which hampers

the

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nature by adding to the burden

to

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climate change.

Besides

, more alarming problems are

also

caused,

for instance

, acid rain and depletion of fossil fuels.

Consequently

, it is reasonable that some activists might want to discourage people from taking planes by increasing the fee in order to save the world. Having discussed the advantages and disadvantages of inexpensive boarding passes, I am

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inclined

inclinded

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inclined

to the idea of offering cheaper

tickets

as it allows more people to explore the hidden gems around the globe and

thus

narrow

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the gap between the affluent and the

underprivelaged

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underprivileged

. Still, we cannot ignore the fact that it harms the environment in an array of ways.

Hence

, it is high time for the

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government

governemnt

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government

and

enterpreneurs

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entrepreneurs

to develop reusable energy and establish environmental-saving policies while the general public

to adopt

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more environmentally friendly daily habits.