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Smacking children is good to discipline a child. Do you agree or disagree?

#children #discipline #child
Traditionally one of the efficient
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 to discipline
children
 is to give corporal punishment.
However
, some people argue that physical punishment might have a severe negative effect on
children
’s
emotion
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. In
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 both opinions will be discussed, and I will add
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my views at the end.
First
 off, as
children
 are immature, they easily make a mistake and it leads to fixed habits which
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 hard to change later on. The most efficient way to correct their errors is to let them know on the spot when the
misdemeanors
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occurred.
Besides
, as people are cunning, they used to avoid adults when they have bad
behaviors
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.
This
 is the reason why we need to give the strongest feedback to students through physical punishment. Corporal disciplines are instant, effective, and even very educational.
On the other hand
, smacking
children
 could give a detrimental effect on
children
’s mental status. Many researchers argue
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 when
children
 are exposed to violence it could deter their mental development.
Besides
, it is reported that hitting
children
 is not as
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 as we might expect. It does not let minors think what is the reason
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 their mis conductors, rather than it makes students
to
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make a lie to escape the miserable situation. What is
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more, It might leave unforgettable traumas on
children
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that
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will lead to other mental disorders or diseases
.
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 To sum up, there are positive and negative effects on smacking
children
, but I do think the latter is much more influential
to
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children
. For
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 better education, what we need is
gentle
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a gentle
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 and kind attitude, not harsh methods.
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