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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems to what sextent do you agree or disagree

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In recent years, there have been two different opinions, one of which is that
people
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 living in foreign
countries
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 face several problems due to the
language
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 barrier, and the other is speaking in a foreign
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 has less impact on living as a foreigner. But, I am personally in
favor
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 of the former.
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 with, if we consider living in any European country where most
people
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 speak their
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 as
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 any students who want to pursue
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 from German universities must have a certain level of speaking Deutsch which is the native
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 of Germany, because
people
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 there barely talk English.
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, living in Germany without having Deutsch speaking skill,
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 will fail to communicate or socialize with
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 and will face difficulties in buying necessary items from groceries which are some basic things one need to do for living a healthy life. There are some records of
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 coming back to their home
countries
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 even without completing their
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 as they could not cope with
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 barriers. Another point worth mentioning is that we may not avail a better job without having proper
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 skills in the country we are living in. Many companies in foreign
countries
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 recruit only them as an employee who has a great talent in communication along with the
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 they hold.
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, to secure a fantastic job
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 is a must.
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 means
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 who have lackings in speaking a foreign
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 where they are living will have to do the low paid job even if they have specialized
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. In conclusion, without having excellent communicative
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 skills, it becomes difficult to live in foreign
countries
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 as it will hinder both social and practical activities.
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