You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Describe what the problem was. • Tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it. • Suggest your own solution to the problem.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my infuriation regarding the swimming pool's cleanliness, hygiene qualities and timing constraints. I am a regular customer of your pool for the

last

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7 years and I have never encountered

such

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problems. But, Now as the situation is different and I would like to elucidate the copious motives in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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with, the

first

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notion, Recently, I noticed there is a huge amount of dust particles, green leaves and mud stuff got accumulated inside the tank.

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this

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, the colour of the water turned yellow

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of sky blue.

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, staff members are not following timings and they are irregular. It causes a lot of issues as we need to wait for them. I immediately brought my concern to staff notice, they registered a ticket and conveyed that, it will be tracked on high priority and the issue will be sorted out as early as possible.

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, I would like to suggest that it is a good idea to cover the pool area with mats when it is no longer in use.

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, in the recent reports, The Canadian government imposed robust strategies in prioritising the importance of cleanliness, health and hygienic conditions mainly in the sports activities like swimming, football and rugby.

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, I recommend, that every individual should feel responsible and accountable to keep the bath premises clean. Please do let me know if my request is possible. should you have any concerns or

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clarifications, please do not hesitate to call on my mobile. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Ram.

balaji.vit112Sun Sep 04 2022

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

275 words

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