The charts below show projections for the global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

The charts below show projections for the global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.
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The graphs illustrate the world manufacturing expectations by sector between 2010 and 2060.
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, there's little change in projected
production
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by six different kinds of sectors in the two years, with manufacturing and services being the most dominant. It is forecast that the services and manufacturing sectors together will account for more than half of global
production
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in 2040 and 2060, 71% (40% and 31%) and 74% (41% and 33%) respectively.
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the proportion of
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from agriculture and energy will be forecast to experience a significant decline,
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it has the lowest figures in the sector. The proportion of
production
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from energy is expected to decline from 7% in 2040 to 5% in 2060. It is
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anticipated that there will be a
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dramatic drop in agriculture manufacturing from 4% to 1% with manufacture in materials, comprising 4% in 2060 compared to 3% in 2040. As regards infor-communications and technology, there is expected to be little difference in the proportion of
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in
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sector's percentage, with a slight rise from 15% to 16% over the period.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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