Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

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teachers at school should not give home assignments to students, while other think that

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is an essential way to improve young

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education. In the following

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both views

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topic will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached. On the one side of the

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, there are a variety of reasons why

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should not give home study tasks to

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. The main reason to consider

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no

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to do, they will have more free time to do other activities.

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, playing sports, drawing, and playing computer

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which can reduce

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class at school.

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is that some activities especially playing sports can increase happiness, improve social

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and good

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with their friends.

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, some opponents may argue that

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is a crucial way to improve

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skills. One of the obvious reasons is that doing

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after class

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help

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to review lessons.

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, the high scores are taken by

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a lot of assignments.

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to

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at math, they should

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frequently practice

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math equations.

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,

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is increased good

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with their family because parents or siblings can teach young people to solve

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difficult assignment. Having considered both sides of the

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, it seems to me that both views of the

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have their merits.

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, on balance I personally believe that young people should allocate time to do

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and do other activities equally. Doing so can improve education skills and decrease stress in the present and in the future life.