Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

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teachers at school should not give home assignments to pupils, while other think that

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is an essential way to improve young

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education. In the following paragraphs, both views

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topic will be discussed in detail before my opinion is reached. On the one side of the

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, there are a variety of reasons why

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should not give home study tasks to

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. The main reason to consider

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to do, they will have more leisure time to do other activities.

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, doing some hobbies, drawing pictures, or playing computer games which of these can reduce the tension from class.

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is that some activities especially playing sports can increase happiness, social skill,

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and good

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with their friends.

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, some opponents may argue that doing

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is a crucial way to improve their education

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. One of the obvious reasons is that doing

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after class can help students to review lessons and enhance their

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, the high scores are taken by doing a lot of

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, if students need to

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at math

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, they should practice solving math equations regularly.

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,

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can increase good relationships between students and their

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because parents or siblings can guide them to resolve difficult assignments. Having considered both sides of the

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, it seems to me that both views of the

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have their merits.

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, on balance I personally believe that young people should allocate time to do

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and do other activities equally. Doing so can improve education

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and decrease stress in the present and in the future life.