You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • Say what the participant liked about the hotel. • Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. • Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future.

Dear sir, My name is Tahsin Adam, I work as a meeting coordinator for eagle company and I arranged a business lunch at your hotel yesterday.

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of all, the members participating in the meeting would like to thank you for the hospitality and appreciate the outstanding of the grinding staff.

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, I am writing regarding the food quality because all participants were upset

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the food served at the lunch.

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, the meats were a bit salty and so oily, and the vegetables were not cooked freshly.

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, no one finished their meal and started complaining.

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, I and my manager who was hosting the event felt embarrassed as nobody eating the food.

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, our company is organizing some more crucial meetings with our clients in the near future, and to avoid repeating

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type of situation. I would like to suggest that more care must be taken about salt and oil standards of the meats, and the vegetables must be cooked freshly.

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, I would like to recommend that offer some desserts and ice cream pre-lunch. I hope you understand my concerns and appreciate them.  Regards . Tahsin Adam