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Some people believe that children should do what their parents tell them to do; others think children must learn to think for themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #children #parents
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society that should we give
young
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 generation liberty to do whatever they want. A portion of the community
suggest
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 their
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caretakers
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care takers
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 have full right to control over their lives while
bold minded
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 and I believe, they ought to understand the importance of
independence
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the independence
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 of
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 thoughts and emotions. Both
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views are elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs of
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controlabilty
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controllability
 of guardians on their children's
life
. They think that
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they
thay
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they
 are not mature enough so they can easily
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some
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unethical people or even
they
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indulge themselves in illegal activities because they are not well known about the consequences. That's why they need to
listen
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 them. Another valuable point for
this
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parents
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 are their
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well-wishers
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well
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 wishers and they always want to provide
better
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life
to
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 them
even
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 support them whenever they need like when a person is going through from hard time their
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caretakers
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care takers
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caretakers
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 always stand with him and conceal
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 motivational stories.
On the other hand
, some support the practical approach as they opine boldness
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and improvise
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improvise
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 the confidence level of a person which is a key component to
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 success in
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life
. Apart from
this
, freedom provides a great exposure of knowledge to them regarding every
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 of
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life
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Consequently
, their instant reaction capability is improved and bravely they will cope
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with any kind of situation. According to a finding, to exemplify,
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a youngster
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youngster
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 who
take
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 their own decisions are bliss with great
problem solving
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 skills. In conclusion, both the approaches have their own significance in young people's
life
 journey but
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 completely go with the latter idea as with
this
 they become courageous as well as learn about numerous prospectives of
life
.
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