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Too many old historical buildings are in danger and demolished in many countries What are the main reasons How can they be protected

#buildings #danger #countries
n
this
 modern world, the nation is more fascinated by technology. Certain groups of people think that traditional skills are taken by technological advancement while others reject
this
 notion. According to me, there is no doubt that we are losing our traditional skills. In the below paragraph, I will explain my perspective which will lead to a logical conclusion.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rapid urbanization
  • residential developments
  • structural integrity
  • financial constraints
  • irreversible damage
  • legislation
  • cultural importance
  • collaboration
  • conservation
  • public awareness
  • technological advancements
  • preservation techniques
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