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With advances in technological communication, more and more people are able to work from home. This increase of homeworking had been of real benefit to workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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Many
employers
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 are now offering their
employees
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 the option
to
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WFH
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.
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, both
employers
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 and
employers
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 will have much more cost savings and freedom. I agree that the significant impacts are positive on companies and their
employees
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. Working from home has a large effect on the costs for both
employers
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 and their staff. One of the reasons that
employers
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also
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the
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costs. There are associated with renting, electricity, heating and air conditioning and other expenses that keep an office running.
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, companies cover the extra costing and they don’t need to concentrate
everything
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. There are many financial benefits of
WFH
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 for
employees
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. The ways to save
costings
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 for
employees
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 are commuting, clothes, coffee, food costs and childcare, etc. The most obvious cost savings that result from having
employees
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WFH
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 is reduced overhead. In conclusion,
WFH
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 is highly beneficial for companies and their
employees
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.
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, cost savings are allowing
business
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 and staff to save money and both of them can manage their time as they like because of freedoms.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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