To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insect as a food source. However, some people believe that insect are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drowbacks of eating insects?

Nowadays, as well known, our planet has

constantly

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growing population. Due to

this

, countries should make use

edible

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of edible

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insects

as a

food

source.

However

, some people believe that harvesting

insects

can negatively affect nature. So, from my point of view, It benefits both society and

environment

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the environment

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positively.

First

, with growing

food

demand all over the world, sustainable insect farming can provide an alternative source of protein which requires fewer

resource

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resources

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than

from

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an equivalent amount from traditional protein sources. The culinary aspects of edible

insects

provide variety in

food

.

Moreover

,

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making

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use of edible

insects

as

foods

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food

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might end

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hunger, in Africa,

for instance

. In fact, restaurants and

food

markets can make a lot of money by including

insects

food

cuisines, attracting more customers and serving starters, and salads that

contains

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insects

.

For example

, many street

food

shops in Thailand and China

that

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apply

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serve salads, breakfast with

insects

and other

food

items are expanding

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their

thier

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their

business because the

amount

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of customers

are

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increasing on daily basis.

In addition

, we

also

should think about our ecological situation. The farming of

insects

gives rise to a steady supply of waste products that can be used to fertilize soils and improve crop growth.

Furthermore

, domesticated

food

-producing animals produce methane which causes the greenhouse effect.

Finally

, there are so

much

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opinions: opposite and the same. And I assume, that

argues

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between

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how and what to eat better will never end.

However

, each person has a right to choose how to live and what to eat. And no one can choose better than you.