Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say that they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both points of view and five your own opinion.

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games are a harmful issue for individuals ,particularly

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at an early age. The majority of experts emphasize that. Electronic causes several diseases against

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, due, It acquires him ignoration and failure. the bulk of fulk thinks that.

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games help people to ergonomic and on the other side think

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dislike that. In my view, The series and

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games which consist of harmful porn of sight cause a lot of hazardous problems in the brain of

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. The two disadvantages of using computers are making them aggressive and making them not respectfully.

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with, the majority of violence conditions by a carton of series, due When the

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watch like

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kind of sight their personality will be criminality in the future. To illustrate, when the child became addicted to

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like it progressively.

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, The parents must be aware of that. They must prohibit him from that.

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, They must define a particular time for watching TV for their sons,

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they must monitor them. What did he watch? In the brief, The violent carton is a fundamental reason

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making the

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aggressive. To start with, The rude

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don't

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respect any individual in front of him, so the people don't accept him in society, For illustrate, If the

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obtains

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characteristic. He will not allow older people to sit in public places.

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, If the individual overwatch violence cartons. he will be like that, because his brain became occupied via violence, so We must skip

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barrier from childhood. To sum up, childhood which defines the personality of a

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. When he grows up. In conclusion, overusing electronic devices, as well as, following TV series produces a rude

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and without ethics,

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we can not prohibit ourselves from using TV or

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, we must be aware. When we use it.