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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

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In today’s world, a group of
people
 think if someone is rich and has a lot of properties, he is a successful man. I believe belongings and
money
 is the main factor to see if someone is successful or not,
however
, to reach
the
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success
 you should find the way and road to get rich which is not simple as taking pills. Most of the
people
 on the richest
people
 list are successful
people
 who have businesses and companies. In my opinion, we should call rich
people
 successful too, because they did hard work in the past to reach their targets and all of them had a dream one day to be a successful man, which they have both
money
 and
success
 right now.
For example
, Ilan Musk is the richest
person
 in the world, he is the owner of Tesla and SpaceX which are both Ilan’s achievements.
Thus
, wealth and
money
 is the major unit to measure
success
.
In addition
, as I said the main goal to be a successful
person
 is to get rich and the answer to
that is
 not simple because each
person
 can have a different way to find that
money
 and make himself a successful
person
.
For instance
, Steve Job was the founder of Apple; he was not rich and successful at
first
 but when he created his company and started selling iPhones, his profit increased immediately,
as a result
, he earned more
money
 and he becomes one of the most successful
people
 in the IT field. To conclude, what I am telling you is to get rich
first
 and after that
success
 will come with it, which you have to find the way to that because the major factor to measure your
success
 is your
money
.
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