Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree?
People
’s opinion
differ, as to whether or not Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
people
should eat meat
. While there are some strong arguments in favour of vegetarianism, I still believe that meat
is necessary for people
’s health up to certain age.
There are several reasons why people
should et
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eat
meat
. First
of all, it has a great nutritious role in our daily diet. For instance
, minerals like zinc, magnesium and ferrous are very common in lambs and beef and may lead to an increase in the
blood quality and boost our immune system. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, in my country pediatricians
highly recommend Change the spelling
paediatricians
to give
kids lamb, because it is rich in vitamins B3, B6, Change the verb form
giving
B12
and these vitamins are very important for efficient energy, amino acid and red blood Correct word choice
and B12
cells
production. Change the noun form
cell
In addition
, chicken breasts have been used by athletes as a requirement in their special training.
On the other hand
, many doctors say that there are many benefits in
vegetarianism. Change preposition
to
Firstly
, it reduces risks
of heart diseases and cancers Correct article usage
the risks
such
as colon cancer. Second
, the risk of obesity and high blood pressure is also
lower. In addition
to the health issues, the majority of people
who has
chosen vegetarianism, believe that we should treat animals in a human way. Religions like Buddhism and Judaism, have Change the verb form
have
teaching
Change the verb form
taught
on
the humane treatment of animals or strict rules about diet. Everybody knows that Change preposition
about
cow
is a sacral animal in India.
In conclusion, modern ideas about health, Correct article usage
the cow
environment
concerns and the ethical treatment of animals have persuaded an increasing number of Replace the word
environmental
people
in recent years to become vegetarians. But I still believe that meat
is an essential part of our diet table especially
for youngsters.Add the comma(s)
,especially
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