You recently did a short cookery course.The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter: - describe what you enjoyed about the course - say how much cooking you have done since the course - suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to share my feedback on your cookery
course
which I have
attended one month back.
My name is Aman Malik, and I enrolled Unnecessary verb
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for
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course
on north-indian
food. It was one of the best decisions of my life because Change the capitalization
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a wide variety of dishes were taught in the seven days program. Also
, I really enjoyed the practical session where it was also
shown that
how the use of spices can make a big difference in the taste.
Earlier, I used to order food from outside, but ever since I completed the Correct word choice
apply
course
, I am cooking my dinner daily and feel really proud to eat delicious self-cooked food. Moreover
, I received so much applause from my friends when I invited them over dinner
, and the credit goes to your Change preposition
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course
.
When I told my friends about your school, some of them also
wanted to join the course
. They are, however
, looking for a program which teaches south-indian
recipes. It would be great if your could curate and offer a Change the capitalization
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course
on similar lines as many of my friends would be surely joining it.
Please let me know whenever you start the new course
.
Yours faithfully,
Aman MalikSubmitted by amanmalik640 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite