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More and more young children have mobile phones. Some people say it is a good thing for them, while others say it is a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Mobile
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 have certainly become ubiquitous, especially in the hands of
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. Some people hold the opinion that it is advantageous, whereas others say that it is not advisable for
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 to have
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 both views will be discussed. I believe that if used wisely and within limits, the advantages are more than the disadvantages. There are many reasons why some people say that it is good if
children
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 have mobile
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,
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 feel more at ease because they know that
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 can contact them if
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 arises.
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,
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 learn a lot about technology by using these gadgets, and these gadgets help in education
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, most
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 today have applications
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a dictionary
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, through which people can find the meaning of any word, which is difficult for them.
Cell
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phones
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 can be used to submit assignments, or to set reminders for study.
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, those who are opposed to
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 having
cell
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phones
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 assert that today's
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phones
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 are not just
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, they are
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phones
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. They give too much power
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 the hands of the
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. If misused, they can play havoc with the
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's lives. Most
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 cannot keep an eye on what their
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 are using
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cell
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phone
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 for.
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,
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 get distracted when crossing the road while texting on the
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 and
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 can lead to accidents. I believe that the merits of
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 the demerits if
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 make a conscious effort to choose the right
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 for their child. They can block unwanted calls, set time limits for
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 usage, prevent access to certain websites, and locate their child with the built-in Global Positioning System (GPS). To sum up, for the safety of the child and to keep
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'
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 at ease,
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 should have a
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phone
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 but the duty is on the
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 to make the right choice of
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