The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
To begin
with, the harmful effects of smoking are well known, Linking Words
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nevertheless
many Add a comma
,nevertheless
people
still Use synonyms
smoke
. İ will explain why Use synonyms
the
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apply
people
keep going to Use synonyms
smoke
and how to decrease the number of smoking Use synonyms
people
in the community.
Let us refer to the harmful effects of smoking, it leads to too much CO gas Use synonyms
to pass
into the blood. Change the verb form
passing
Thus
, it causes various diseases. Linking Words
Moreover
, İt prevents sports with insufficient oxygen. Not to mention, Linking Words
people
are paying a lot of money for cigarettes. It is more expensive than essential food. Harmful Use synonyms
for
the economy. Smoking Change preposition
to
people
have to sit in an open area all the Use synonyms
time
even in winter and it accounts for Use synonyms
bad
smell. Correct article usage
a bad
Hence
, Linking Words
people
have less sociability.
Use synonyms
İ
think the reason Correct pronoun usage
I
of
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apply
the
Correct your spelling
that
people
keep going to Use synonyms
smoke
, feeling relaxed even for a short Use synonyms
time
and it takes a long Use synonyms
time
to see the negative results of smoking. Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
People
know that smoking causes Use synonyms
the
disease but they do not feel bad in a short Correct article usage
apply
time
because smoking makes Use synonyms
people
sick over the years. Fortunately, My uncle had been smoking for 20 years and he didn’t care about the pain in his leg. Now he has one leg and is very regretful. İf Use synonyms
people
get more health checks, they can notice it is dangerous for Use synonyms
health
. % 35 of athletes start smoking at the end of their career because of psychological problems and they think that they don't need a healthy body anymore. Correct pronoun usage
their health
For
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instance
Gedson Fernandes was once the best player in Portugal but now he can not walk without help and still smokes. When Add a comma
,instance
people
do not have a hobby, they get bored. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, they turn to things like cigarettes and alcohol. We have to make fun habits. Linking Words
People
give a lot of money to cigarettes but they do not do that suddenly. So they can not understand the Use synonyms
harmful
of smoking to Replace the word
harm
economy
. İn my country the government's measure for smoking increases the cigarette tax. Add an article
the economy
As a result
, most Linking Words
people
do not Use synonyms
smoke
anymore. Smoking Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
has
Change the verb form
have
very
bad smell and they are spending Correct article usage
a very
smoke
Use synonyms
to
around. Change preposition
apply
Hence
, nobody wants to hang out with them. İf Linking Words
the
smoking Correct article usage
apply
people
know thatUse synonyms
,
they would have to choose between smoking and socializing.
İn conclusion, everybody knows the results of smoking but they need a long Remove the comma
apply
time
to see these. İf we demonstrate the negative results before it's too late, they would abandon Use synonyms
this
bad habit.Linking Words
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