To begin
with, the harmful effects of smoking are well known,
many
people
still
smoke
. İ will explain why
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people
keep going to
smoke
and how to decrease the number of smoking
people
in the community.
Let us refer to the harmful effects of smoking, it leads to too much CO gas
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into the blood.
Thus
, it causes various diseases.
Moreover
, İt prevents sports with insufficient oxygen. Not to mention,
people
are paying a lot of money for cigarettes. It is more expensive than essential food. Harmful
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the economy. Smoking
people
have to sit in an open area all the
time
even in winter and it accounts for
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smell.
Hence
,
people
have less sociability.
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people
keep going to
smoke
, feeling relaxed even for a short
time
and it takes a long
time
to see the negative results of smoking.
For example
,
People
know that smoking causes
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disease but they do not feel bad in a short
time
because smoking makes
people
sick over the years. Fortunately, My uncle had been smoking for 20 years and he didn’t care about the pain in his leg. Now he has one leg and is very regretful. İf
people
get more health checks, they can notice it is dangerous for
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. % 35 of athletes start smoking at the end of their career because of psychological problems and they think that they don't need a healthy body anymore.
For
Gedson Fernandes was once the best player in Portugal but now he can not walk without help and still smokes. When
people
do not have a hobby, they get bored.
Furthermore
, they turn to things like cigarettes and alcohol. We have to make fun habits.
People
give a lot of money to cigarettes but they do not do that suddenly. So they can not understand the
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of smoking to
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. İn my country the government's measure for smoking increases the cigarette tax.
As a result
, most
people
do not
smoke
anymore. Smoking
people
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bad smell and they are spending
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around.
Hence
, nobody wants to hang out with them. İf
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smoking
people
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they would have to choose between smoking and socializing.
İn conclusion, everybody knows the results of smoking but they need a long
time
to see these. İf we demonstrate the negative results before it's too late, they would abandon
this
bad habit.
