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These days people are living into their 90s and beyond. As a result, there is increasing concern about care for the elderly.

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Nowadays, the older populations are being lived into ninety's and beyond, resulting in
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 about elderly
care
. In my opinion, it is the responsibility of the children to look after them, when they are above 90 years.
To begin
 with, the primary reason why family members are responsible for elderly
care
 appears to be they can provide better
care
 and support to older people
,
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 when compared to the government.
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, especially in developing countries
such
 as India, Srilanka, and Nepal, people live in extended families.
As a result
, even grandchildren are taking
care
 of their grandfathers and grandmothers, particularly during the summer vacation in those countries.
Therefore
, the elderly population having
such
 close-knit families would make them feel content and secure. Another reason is that it is a blessing for their children and grandchildren if they look after their parents.
This
 means it is believed religiously that if parents were looked after by their children during their old age,
then
 their kids would take of them when they become old.
For instance
,
this
 theory was researched and found that 90 % of participants could see the positive results of elderly
care
. In conclusion, extended support,
care
 and religious belief
of
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why it is the responsibility
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 to ta take
care
 of parents.
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