Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Due to the development of technology,

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generation seems to rely too much on

smartphones

. It is so common that

children

spend

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a lot of time on their electronic devices,

such

as

smartphones

. In my opinion, I consider

this

issue has its advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, there are many advantages of using smart devices and it gives us various reasons why young people took hours on them. From the

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perspective,

smartphone

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the smartphone

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is an excellent tool for learning. If students need to search

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correct information, it is faster and more useful for them to find the answers.

In addition

, there are countless free-learning materials on the internet

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be found,

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and it

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it

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sometimes gave

children

more opportunities to explore the new fields they

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interest

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in.

Also

, some kids who lived in poverty may not

had

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that many resources for learning,

however

,

this

small device is possible to narrow the gap between rich and poor.

On the other hand

, some parents

worried

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that

children

addicted

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to

smartphones

, and waste a lot of on playing online games.

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means that

children

are

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probably

not

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pay enough attention to their school assignments, and it leads to terrible

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and performance in school. Without concentrating on their work in school,

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would successfully apply for the qualification of

accessing

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in

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university. In conclusion, I think there are pros and cons of using

smartphones

,

although

there are some drawbacks, I still believe that

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new technology is a positive development in the future.