You have recently landed in a foreign country on a work visa and need information about the place in and around the city. Write a letter to the relocation assistance provider seeking help and in your letter, Write why you are writing the letter What kind of information you want How and by when you can get the requested information

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to get some information about my destination, I have been reaching

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country since 1 hour ago,I have some questions from you who know a lot about

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country

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I hope you can help me because I am totally unfamiliar with

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country and I am distracted. I used to search on the internet about how I can find a good job and an apartment but I could not find a good result on the internet, for

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, the reason I wanted to ask you, can you help me with one area where is good for renting an apartment

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do you think I can find a job in the suburb or do you have a special offer for me. I can receive your answer from my email or you can send a message through Whatsapp,

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, I am free

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week and I can wait for your message, I am going to stay at the hotel for one month till I get your help, I am looking forward to receiving your answer. Yours faithfully, Sajjad

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

183 words

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