in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from healthy problem as a result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

It is a global phenomenon with increasing problems arising from health issues due to the unhealthy

foods

that are present in the economy. Most countries have a growing number of communities that are having health issues from consuming too much fast

food

.

Consequently

is indeed a need for governments to apply a higher tax on

this

kind of

food

. I totally agree on

this

matter. Nowadays, the population opt to choose

food

that is

easily available in the market due to some reasons that it saves time and

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efficient when needed.

For instance

,

people

who work early in the morning choose to purchase breakfast in some store that provides on-the-go

food

and cheaper

foods

that usually do not have enough nutrition.

Thus

, giving them more time to focus and come late to their work.

On the other hand

, the government should impose

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increasing the tax on

foods

such

as processed

foods

and fast

food

, so that most

people

will choose to prepare

foods

on their own

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healthier and more beneficial

as a result

public in the future will be healthier and avoid the risk of certain diseases that

this

food

contains if it is consumed more than the required amount. In ,addition

people

should

also

be encouraged by the local government to plant vegetable, green leafy vegetable, and fruit-bearing trees in their backyards so that it is readily available at all times.

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this

,means

people

will have a healthier diet and healthier lifestyle

thus

they can avoid diseases in the future.

Furthermore

,

people

who opted to plant vegetables in the available areas that they

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give them more benefits ,

for example

, planting can be a form of exercise, and it can

also

alleviate stress on an everyday basis. It is

also

more economical because we are not required to purchase

foods

that are ready in our garden. In conclusion, I totally agree with the idea of imposing a higher tax on

foods

that could be detrimental to one's health especially if consumed in higher portions. Through these, the government could help

people

to be healthy and avoid diseases that

this

food

can give to any individual.