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The two given pie charts give information about the remote shopping revenue earned for area of retail in Canada in two years 2005 and 2010.

The two given pie charts give information about the remote shopping revenue earned for area of retail in Canada in two years 2005 and 2010.
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The two given pie charts give information about the remote shopping revenue earned for
area
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the area
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 of retail in Canada in
two
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 years 2005 and 2010. In general,
it is clear that
 Electronics and Appliances are purchased most and stood at the bottom
was
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 video games in 2005. Meanwhile, in 2010, Food and Beverage became the best seller among
four
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 sectors whilst the figure for
Home
 Furnishings hit the lowest point throughout the examined period. In 2005, the percentage of revenue earned on Electronics and Appliances stood at 35% and became top of the chart. With 10% lower, the proportion of
Home
 Furnishings was the second highest area of online sales.
In addition
, both Electronics & Appliance and
Home
 Furnishings witnessed a slight decrease to 30% and 15% respectively in the course of 5 years starting from 2005. Stood at 18%, the percentage of
profit
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the profit
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of
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 Video Games hit the lowest point of the retail sectors examined in 2005. After 5 years, the rate of Video Games profit increased negligibly by 5% and surpassed
Home
 Furnishing at third place.
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 similar pattern was seen in Food and Beverage which rose significantly by 10% from 22% to become the best-selling field in 2010.
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