More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative impact?

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Remote job offers are becoming popular nowadays in many companies. I think
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is a huge change in our workforce system. In
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essay, I'll demonstrate why I think
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change has more positive effects in both social and practical life than negative ones. While I will shed some
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on the benefits, I'll mention a few harms.
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and foremost, there are many advantages
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working at
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. One of the most important advantages is the
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that the employees can experience when working at
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. I think if he feels comfortable, he will be more productive.
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, it may lead to
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significant progress and huge improvement in the company itself.
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, the majority of the employees in Vodafone company which is a very successful company are now working part-time at their
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to that, working at
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will increase the bond between the family members. You can see your children and your wife constantly throughout the day which may feel
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safe and insure.
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,
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job has little
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such
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as low wage. working outside usually has an extra bonus and a big salary than those who
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, I see that isn't a big deal and we can fix
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challenge by improving our skills to compete and take a high salary. To sum up, working at
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is increasing in today's world. While it may
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few
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negatives, I see that its positive impact is bigger.
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