You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤ Dear Manager, ㅤㅤ I hope

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letter reaches you in good health. My name is Marjanay, and I have recently moved to

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neighbourhood. I have come across your sports club and am very interested in becoming a member. ㅤㅤ My enthusiasm for joining your club stems from my passion for fitness and maintaining an active lifestyle. I believe that being part of your esteemed sports club will allow me to engage in regular exercise and socialize with like-minded individuals. ㅤㅤ I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide me with some details regarding the membership options, associated costs, and any specific requirements for joining.

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, I would like to know the club’s operating hours and the range of facilities available. ㅤㅤ A prompt response to my inquiries would be highly beneficial in helping me make a decision. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. I look forward to the possibility of becoming a member of your esteemed establishment. ㅤㅤ Yours faithfully, Marjanay

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Task Achievement

Consider explicitly asking for information about the activities offered beyond just mentioning facilities.

Task Achievement

Ensure that every specific bullet point in the task is directly addressed for a complete response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized with clear paragraphs, following a logical structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate and effectively bookend the content of the letter.

Task Achievement

The tone is polite and suitable for a letter to a business or organization representative.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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