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Living in a country where you have to speak foreign Language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

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Living in a
country
 where people have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems, where the individuals have to fight against the system if they want to survive in
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 environment which might offer them some opportunities. Personally, I’ve seen different migratory phenomena across the world, in Africa people move into Europe looking for a good life, whereas in Latin America due
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 economics and social aspects, nowadays, people
are embark
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them
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on a long journey to get to the United States, sometimes some of them don’t reach the goal because getting there means have enough courage to go through all the vicissitudes, outrages and abuses along the way.
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 the journey might be
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bittersweet, once they get the goal, their dream goal to be in that Land of Opportunities
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was all worth it, but that was only the
first
 step of building a new life.
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, finding a house, a job, etc. Immigrants have to face different problems with the system of that new
country
, one of them is the language. Most of them don’t speak the language or they can talk it with some difficulties but there’s the other challenge
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 because discrimination
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 and
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 there’s when they have to challenge
theirselves
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themselves
 to overcome those difficulties, Not to mention, they
also
 have to learn about the culture of the new
country
 and figuring out how they can fit well in that society. To sum up, awareness about everything you wanna do in life
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 to be taken as a serious thing, leaving out your
country
 it’s an adventure that might be wonderful or a
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 nightmare if you don’t have a plan.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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