A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter -describe what this book was about -explain how this book influenced you -say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Editor, I want to give
this
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letter to you
due to
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your announcement about 'The
book
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that influences me a lot' I had read the
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"
INVESTMENT
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" by Alexander Graham. I bought it 2 years ago since I am interested in
investment
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. When I read from the first page until the end, I realized that
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is a rudimentary thing for increasing my prosperity.
This
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book
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mostly explains long-term
investment
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. After that, the writer is able to attract readers with his knowledge about physicological trading
also
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money management.
Thus
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, these things enlightened me as I got fresh knowledge on how to manage my wealth
as well as
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possible. Since I'm able to manage my wealth in an
investment
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instrument. I believe that
this
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book
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is able to influence people who want to start investing in the stock market.
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, people will get many advantages owing to many knowledge about physicological trading and money management. Eventually, I recommend
this
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book
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to you.Hopefully, people can start to read
this
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book
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immediately. Sincerely Yohanes
Submitted by patricius.yohanes on

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Task Achievement
Consider expanding on how the book influenced you with more specific examples or personal anecdotes to make your point more compelling.
Coherence & Cohesion
Pay closer attention to spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'physicological' instead of 'psychological') to enhance clarity and professionalism.
Task Achievement
You have successfully identified a book and elaborated on both its content and impact on you, satisfying the task's requirements.
Coherence & Cohesion
Good use of paragraphs to organize the letter around different topics (description of the book, its influence on you, and its potential impact on others).
Topic Vocabulary:
  • influential
  • perspective
  • transformative
  • introspection
  • universal
  • timeless
  • contemporary
  • resonate
  • inspiration
  • genre
  • anecdote
  • relevance
  • beliefs
  • motivations
  • significance
  • courteous
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