A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter -describe what this book was about -explain how this book influenced you -say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
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Dear Editor,
I want to give
this
letter to you due to
your announcement about 'The book
that influences me a lot'
I had read the book
"INVESTMENT
" by Alexander Graham. I bought it 2 years ago since I am interested in investment
. When I read from the first page until the end, I realized that Investment
is a rudimentary thing for increasing my prosperity. This
book
mostly explains long-term investment
.
After that, the writer is able to attract readers with his knowledge about physicological trading also
money management. Thus
, these things enlightened me as I got fresh knowledge on how to manage my wealth as well as
possible.
Since I'm able to manage my wealth in an investment
instrument. I believe that this
book
is able to influence people who want to start investing in the stock market. Besides
, people will get many advantages owing to many knowledge about physicological trading and money management.
Eventually, I recommend this
book
to you.Hopefully, people can start to read this
book
immediately.
Sincerely
YohanesSubmitted by patricius.yohanes on
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Task Achievement
Consider expanding on how the book influenced you with more specific examples or personal anecdotes to make your point more compelling.
Coherence & Cohesion
Pay closer attention to spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'physicological' instead of 'psychological') to enhance clarity and professionalism.
Task Achievement
You have successfully identified a book and elaborated on both its content and impact on you, satisfying the task's requirements.
Coherence & Cohesion
Good use of paragraphs to organize the letter around different topics (description of the book, its influence on you, and its potential impact on others).