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Space explorations costs tax payers an extra orbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space explorations?

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Space
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exploroations
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exploration
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price
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 taxpayers an
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exorbitant
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 every year.
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 the advantage and disadvantage of spending
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, there are many advantages of spending
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space
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explorations
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 ass, individual cultures will develop and
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 will develop. The
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.Observing
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 is an incredible experience for a community. An extensive survey conducted by CNN revealed that spending
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 on different activities about
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 is absolutely
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. It would increase people's Cultures.The
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development
developtment
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development
on
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science
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 due to spending
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 exploration.
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 the one of the huge
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,
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 people must improve it . A study carried out by NASA showed that
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money
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 events will
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% of increased
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 of
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 projects. İt will increase
countries
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economy
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economies
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, there are many cons of
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money
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 are not a necessity and it is too expensive.The drawback is
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 discoveries are not
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 obligation. people do not have to do that. Research conducted recently indicated that individuals should not
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money
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 because it is not a priority. İf they spend too much
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 on unnecessary things
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wasted
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.The
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 is it is pricey.The price is so significant for individuals. A study carried out by KOC University showed that if
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government
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goverment
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government
spend
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money
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government's
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government's
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 will suddenly decrease. After that
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 economy
impact
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 badly. İn conclusion,
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explorations
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 are so expensive.There are many pros and cons of spending
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 on
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explorations
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. Professors suggested that Government should not spend a lot of
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for
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explorations
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • astronomical costs
  • technological innovations
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • economic stimulus
  • international cooperation
  • financial investment
  • allocation of resources
  • environmental impact
  • ethical considerations
  • high-risk ventures
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