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You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: What the gadget is What you think about it Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

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Dear Sam, Hope
this
 letter of mine finds you in good health and in high spirits. As you already know that I have purchased a mixer blender for my new modular kitchen because it becomes quite challenging to do everything manually. The major reason for buying
this
 appliance was that I was not able to manage cooking at a stipulated time and usually reach late to the office. The mixer comes with 3 jars and only 180 voltage is required for its operation.
Moreover
, it
also
 comes with 1 year of warranty and in case of any damage, the company will repair it at their own cost. I could make fresh juices as well as blend onions and garlic.
However
, it becomes quite challenging while using
this
 machine as it is bulky and is fixed in one place. After I bought
this
 machine, I could see there were multiple options in the shop
such
 as juicers, jar-blenders and many more and were light in weight. If a customer buys an appliance in Lulu Mall, they will give a 40 per cent discount on the
next
 purchase. You can
also
 check out other options for your new kitchen because you would be needing conduction as well. Let me know if you need any
further
 assistance. Your friend, Samanta
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