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Some people say that cheap air travel is good because it enables ordinary people to travel, others think that it is bad for environment. Discuss both the views and include your opinion.

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In
this
 21st century,
people
 like to explore different locations on the earth, in
such
 a scenario it is debatable whether low-cost
air
 movement would help them to fulfil their desire or if it is creating adverse effects on the flora and fauna.
This
 essay shall discuss both views before drawing a logical conclusion along with my opinion. On the one hand,
to begin
 with, one of the most feasible aspects of affordable
air
travel
 is that it offers time-saving to the common
people
 ,
consequently
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 it makes it easy for them to explore various destinations across the globe. By the completion of
this
 wish, ultimately they contribute to the upsurge of the tourism industry where many folks get an opportunity to have employment in the
travel
 and tourism sector ,
eventually
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 it leads to a boost in the economy of respective nations.
In addition
 to
this
, it is obvious thatSome
people
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some people
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 say that cheap
air
travel
 is good because it enables ordinary
people
 to
travel
, others think that it is bad for
environment
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. Discuss both
the
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views and include your opinion as a byproduct of
air
travel
 cultural exchange among the folks leads them to mitigate their own loopholes in society.
On the other hand
, though travelling provides enormous benefits to common
people
, it has certain ramifications on the environment. To illustrate: the rise in
air
travel
 results in the combustion of fossil fuels to a large extent which causes
air
 pollution
,
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emits toxic gases and creates undesirable noise in the surroundings of the airports, these factors attribute to global warming which has, undoubtedly, detrimental effects on the environment.
Furthermore
, low-cost
air
travel
 demands a plethora of airports, for that , the authority needs to acquire fertile land which, in turn, promotes deforestation, as a
,
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result natural habitats of endangered species will get affected and the ecosystem will be disturbed. On close scrutiny,
air
travel
 is not the only factor which hampers nature and can be taken care of by taking appropriate steps, on ,
contrary
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 I believe that, it is no doubt,
low-cost
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that low-cost
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air
travel
 facilitates humankind in numerous ways in order to explore the wonderful world.
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